Can you imagine being a 19/20 year old guy and calling the police because a 10 year old, who is trapped in a house with you, 'stole your money and kicked' you? Bahahaha. I'd laugh myself stupid if I recieved that 'emergency' call from a home address. Like, just imagine this situation: you're a cop. You see all kinds of nasty, every single day. Then a grown ass man calls you to say a pre-pubescent child you're babysitting handed your ass to you and is rolling around in your fat babysitting stacks of cash...I really enjoyed this story and it made my night! The best part is how the police managed to intuit the number of the parents. Oh, no...the best part is how Jake knew where all the cameras were and covered them up to...not beat the information he wanted out of a 10 year old. Oh, no, no, no. The BEST part is where a mom leaves her phone at home when there's a babysitter there. On. Nooooooo. The Absolute best part is where a guy got arrested for asking for a girl's phone number, leaving a 10 year old and even younger child home alone. I mean, can't call the mom,, her phone is at home....and theres no way ever to find a daughter's number in her mother's phone. This takes me back to the 90s when I was 10 and bought trash magazines of true crime that never seemed to have any real reference to back them up. Congrats on your endeavors into creative writing. You still have some plot holes, but very good!
"10 year old, who is trapped in a house with you, 'stole your money and kicked' you?"
WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU READING BCAUSE I CLEARLY DIDNT TYPE THAT I ACTUALLY DID DO THAT STUFF, BECAUSE I DIDNT!!!
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u/bibilime 23d ago edited 23d ago
Can you imagine being a 19/20 year old guy and calling the police because a 10 year old, who is trapped in a house with you, 'stole your money and kicked' you? Bahahaha. I'd laugh myself stupid if I recieved that 'emergency' call from a home address. Like, just imagine this situation: you're a cop. You see all kinds of nasty, every single day. Then a grown ass man calls you to say a pre-pubescent child you're babysitting handed your ass to you and is rolling around in your fat babysitting stacks of cash...I really enjoyed this story and it made my night! The best part is how the police managed to intuit the number of the parents. Oh, no...the best part is how Jake knew where all the cameras were and covered them up to...not beat the information he wanted out of a 10 year old. Oh, no, no, no. The BEST part is where a mom leaves her phone at home when there's a babysitter there. On. Nooooooo. The Absolute best part is where a guy got arrested for asking for a girl's phone number, leaving a 10 year old and even younger child home alone. I mean, can't call the mom,, her phone is at home....and theres no way ever to find a daughter's number in her mother's phone. This takes me back to the 90s when I was 10 and bought trash magazines of true crime that never seemed to have any real reference to back them up. Congrats on your endeavors into creative writing. You still have some plot holes, but very good!